常闻市面书籍,句句实载:写好英语二大作文,需要四种思维,八种套路,十六种框架,外加范文三十篇。内容翔实,图文并茂,一瞥定价,囊中羞涩。纸比米贵,汝等请记:吾生有涯,而知亦无涯。以有涯随无涯,殆矣。但凡大道,一定至简。道亦有道,朝闻道,夕死不可矣!应师法自然,取之精华,为我所用:此谓师夷长技以制夷。
简言之,大作文只写三段,勿写标题,150词足矣,宁多勿少。
第一段只描图,勿评论,重客观。
第二段只归因,勿描图,重观点。
第三段只评论,勿多写,重总结。
第一段
4句:总体描述1句 + 分项描述3句
S1: This XX chart vividly depicts 翻译题目 .
其中,XX可为pie, line, bar(饼图,线图,柱图)
S2: To be specific, A occupies x%, which is the first.(先写最大的)
S3: The second comes B, taking up y%. (再写第二的)
S4: Meanwhile, z%, m% and n% are represented by C, D and E respectively.(不重要的小指标,扔一句话里就行)
其中A-E为指标,x%-n%为具体数值(写数字即可,别写成英文)。
以上四句,不仅涵盖所有数值,且语态句型均变。不重词汇,朴实无华,却能斩获高分。但只适用静态图(无时间变化的图)。若有同一指标的不同时间变化,则属动态图,运用下面的框架:
S1: This XX chart vividly depicts 翻译题目 .
S2: To be specific, A had experienced a climb from x% in 2010 to y% in 2020.
S3: On the contrary, the ten-year’s period had witnessed a sharp slump from m% to n% for the indicator B.
S4: And it is interesting to mention that C had remAIned stable during this stage, at z%.
以上假定了A是上涨,B是下降,C是持平的情况,请根据需要调换相应的词。
提醒1:注意数据单位!不一定是%,有时是万,十万等,想想怎么换算成million.
提醒2:若数据没超过6个,建议全写。若超过6个,筛选重点写。
第二段
4句:总体概括1句 + 原因分析3句
S1: There are several reasons that can account for the figures described above.
S2: To begin with, as the pace of A and B grows faster and faster, this situation is becoming more obvious.
S3: What’s more, the emergence of C can also lead to this scene.
S4: Last but not least, we are nearer to the interconnected world which is now a global village, D can be obtained within minutes or even seconds.
这里的A和B的可替换词:social change, inte.NET, technology, innovation, transportation, commercialization, modernization, globalization等。
C的可替换词:micromedia, share economy, gig economy, AI (Artificial Intelligence), e-books, online games, unendurable strain, intangible cultural heritage等。
D的可替换词:information, tickets, suggestions, friends, sales, orders, academic papers, job opportunities, companionship, payment等。
(词汇可参考泰祺系统阶段英语讲义:182-195页)
提醒1:划线部分可改为作文主题词,更自然,不生硬。
提醒2:基础好建议自己写,摆脱框架限制。常见原因有:经济、文化、政策、心理、环境、权利、风俗等。
第三段
1-2句:趋势预测1句 +(展望未来1句)
S1: From what we have discussed above, we can safely jump to the conclusion that these changes will be continuous in the forthcoming future.
S2: We should spare no effort to make our world more beautiful, dimensional and vigorous. (字数不够时,再写本句;world建议换为作文主题词)
全文提醒1:图表如有时间年份,描图用过去时(或过去完成时)。
全文提醒2:篇幅上第一段与第二段对等,或第二段稍多于第一段。
文毕于此,限于篇幅,未能详述,怎不遗憾!系统写作,知识众多:题目不会译怎办,指标不会写怎办,格式怎办,忘词怎办,写错怎办。望多关注课堂,一始而终,勤勉听课,自有答案。梦里不知身是客,醒来已是梦中人。昨夜星辰昨夜风,今朝努力要狂奔。愿各位朋友戒烟限酒,饮食适度,克制欲望,修炼身心;则高分可期!
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